I Wish My Name Was Ashley ?’s
1. she descirbes what they do as soon as there name was said wich was very disciptive
2. pencils, her name meaning
3.she says that the pencils were all glittery with there names on them she was tring to show how they looked and how she wanted to see one with her name on just one of them so bad
4.she was talking to her cousin and saying about the most imbarrising times in there life and she shares how they all laugh at her name and then her cousing explain y and what her name stood for and that made her realis that he name was one with great pride to be takein in
5.use more detail in some of her explanaions instead of just telling straight up what was said
