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1.All this week I have been excited for one thing above all else this week it was, a party and bills house. He has everything at his house. And then after the party it was nothing but spectacular. Every one had a good time and no one started any drama just friends having fun and messing around.
2.For a long time now I have been trying really hard in Stearns class. He teaches English it’s a pretty easy class over all if you just turn your work in and. Finally when the grades come out it turns up that I have and A in his class. That made me feel incredible finally all of my work paid off
3.Mr. Stearns, my English teacher, has showed me so much stuff this year and has made class more interesting with his great enthusiasm. He just over all makes class a lot more enjoyable.
4.This thing of technology it’s great it makes life so much easier and makes life a lot easier. Its almost like a it talks back to me. I spend so many hours on it. I guess you could say its probably my best friend.
5.Oh my gosh today I did absolutely nothing no fun no games no nothing. No one could hang out because they were all doing something already. All there was to do was my homework, which I was trying to put off because it was hard. Over all nothing was ne fun yesterday it kind of sucked
